- Try writing the scene from a different character’s perspective.
- Try opening you book from a later chapter and see how it affects everything. Try from Ch 2 or 3. Many agents say there’s way too much backstory in opening chapters and the manuscript opens in the wrong place.
- Give your character a fatal flaw you haven’t previously considered. Make them as multi-dimentional as you can.
- Let your characters react in a big way. Let them get mad, hurt, angry, sad, hysterical, etc.
- Switch the setting. Place your character somewhere totally new and see how they react.
- Consider the emotional arc of the character. What’s the one thing that would break them? Then make that happen.
- Make sure your main characters all have a personal stake in the story. Don’t let anyone be there for convenience.
- Look for instances when characters agree on something. What will happen if a character says NO instead? Put as much conflict into every scene as you can. All your dialogue should have some degree of conflict in it: emotional conflict, people that are at odds with one another, different agendas, unspoken fears etc. Good Conversation = Conflict
There’s been so much going on lately! I’ve been gearing up for the upcoming Storymakers Conference next month. It’s the biggest writers conference in Utah and goes for three days. I’m participating in a Publication Primer, where I’m put in a group with three other writers and a published author to workshop a selection from our books. I also entered the first chapter contest where I’ll recieve valuable feedback. The most exciting part for me is that I’m pitching my book to an amazing agent. Connecting with the right agent is a HUGE deal for aspiring authors and one of the very best ways to find your dream agent is to sign up for pitch sessions.
I had new headshots taken by the very talented Tiffany at Adore Photography (pic above is an example) to update my website and business cards and I’m getting excited to reconnect with all my local Utah writer friends. Only a few more weeks!
I also just did a post for Delicious Reads: 5 DELICIOUS READS SECRETS
Don’t tell ANYONE about it.
I’ve been listening to lots of audiobooks lately. Here are a few with the link to my Review on Goodreads:
The Bishop’s Wife by Mette Ivie Harrison: 4 Stars-See My Review This is a really interesting twist- it’s about a murder set in a highly populated Mormon community.
The Girl on the Train by Paula Hawkins: 5 Stars! See My Review I think this is the new BUZZ BOOK right now! It’s a psychological thriller with lots of twists and turns . . . I totally recommend it!
The Price of Blood by Patricia Bracewell: 5 Stars! See My Review This is the second book in this series and I can’t say enough good things about it!
The Devil in the White City by Erik Larson: 3.5 Stars- See My Review We did this book for our Delicious Reads book club. It’s two historical non-fiction stories in one: the serial killer H.H. Holmes and the Chicago World Fair. Both are gripping.
The Stranger by Harlan Coben: 5 Stars! See My Review You can’t really go wrong with a Harlan Coben book. He’s a master with page-turners and didn’t disappoint.
I’m also currently reading The King of Round Valley by Everett Powers, Memory Man by David Baldacci, and Twenty Thousand Leagues Under the Sea by Jules Vern.
So that’s the sum-up of what’s been happening with me! Summer is sneaking right up on me and I have a lot to do before then! Better get crackin’!
Til next time,
As a voracious reader, I love to find complex characters that that move me- the kind I’m rooting for and the ones I love to hate. The more you understand why you’re identifying with your favorite characters, the better you’ll become at choosing books you can’t put down.
Typically, the main characters can be broken down into the protagonist and the antagonist- they’re pretty easy to spot: the protagonist is the one we’re rooting for and the antagonist is the one in the way of the protag’s goal.
But this is where it gets interesting. The characters who move me the most are intricately layered. The hero has several flaws that at any moment could be his/her undoing. And my favorite villains have a sliver of humanity in them- a reason to hope for redemption.
Think of Dexter (Dexter Book Series and Dexter TV Series)- the Miami Forensic specialist who is a serial killer- the caveat is he’s only killing other serial killers who have slipped through the legal system and pose a significant threat. So you want to hate him… but he’s saving lives, so it gets a little complicated. He’s the protagonist in the series, but his “dark passenger” gives him an unexpected depth that leaves you questioning if you love him or hate him.
Consider Miranda Priestly (The Devil Wears Prada Book and The Devil wears Prada Movie). She is one of the most powerful women in the business. She gets what she wants with possess poise and grace toward those she wants to impress. But we love to hate her because she’s so heartless to her staff. She’s the antagonist, but we briefly catch a glimpse of a few redeeming qualities, leaving you to wonder if all her nastiness is a product of her situation.
Jay, from The Great Gatsby (The Great Gatsby Book and The Great Gatsby Movie) is a man of ambition. We admire his tenacity and his passion- we identify with him because we all want to make more out of ourselves. But as the story unfolds from the view of his neighbor, Jay’s shallowness is exposed, leaving us with that sick feeling of a disappearing mirage.
Katniss Everdeen (The Hunger Games Book and The Hunger Games Movie) is the protagonist of this series but in order to save her sister and herself, she has to kill many other innocent teenagers. You don’t want to root for a murderer, but her circumstances force her to do what she does, so you can get behind her motives.
And of course we can’t talk about layered and complex characters who get lost in their fight for good without mentioning Walter White. Walt from Breaking Bad is a high school chemistry teacher with lung cancer. In his quest to provide for the family he will leave behind, he begins cooking and selling Meth. Walt is about as complex of a character as you can get, and we both love and hate him.
As a writer, I try to infuse as much depth into my characters as I can because that evokes emotion and moves us. Everyone has flaws, everyone tries and fails. That’s what we want as readers- to feel the humanity of our favorite characters. To identify with them and then question what you would do in their situation.
The next two books we are reading at Delicious Reads both have complex characters that I’m really excited to read and discuss!
In The Husband’s Secret, by Liane Moriarty (our May selection to be discussed at the beginning of June), the lives of three women are intertwined when Cecilia Fitzpatrich finds a letter from her husband that is only supposed to be opened in the event of his death. The secret held in the envelope will make her question everything.
The Goldfinch, by Donna Tartt is the June selection that I will be moderating at the beginning of July. I’m SO excited about this book!! Little Brown & Co. invited us to be one of their Book Club Insiders and generously sent us copies!! Delicious Reads loves Little Brown & Co!
The Goldfinch just won The Pulitzer Prize! Congrats Donna Tartt!! It’s the story of Theo Decker, who survives an explosion at a museum that kills his mother. It’s in this dire moment that he’s entrusted with a painting of a Goldfinch that changes his life forever. Theo is a very layered and complex character and I’m so excited to discuss everything about him. I’m not going to reveal anything here because I don’t want to spoil your read. Just trust me, pick up this book!!
Hopefully this post helps you understand how to pick out the complexities of your favorite characters, allowing you to appreciate your favorite heroines, heroes and characters you love to hate.
See ya next time!